tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post1198247298414230648..comments2024-03-26T02:52:50.689-04:00Comments on Exquisite Corpse: Occasional table dreamingRoy Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-18049188939105070952012-07-25T10:10:54.117-04:002012-07-25T10:10:54.117-04:00Kathy, this is fantastic. So smooth and redolent.R...Kathy, this is fantastic. So smooth and redolent.Reminds me of big old slumberous French houses on the Mediterranean.Hazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07133986410814852449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74443542720907037612011-11-10T14:24:55.065-05:002011-11-10T14:24:55.065-05:00orange peel imagery is charming.
mindful words, sm...orange peel imagery is charming.<br />mindful words, smiles.<br /><br />keep your talent coming,<br />join us if you could.Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Waltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02102841132897972874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-12947637460360533882011-11-04T02:54:19.703-04:002011-11-04T02:54:19.703-04:00The vivid imagery... playing on to the landscape o...The vivid imagery... playing on to the landscape of my mind.. and with your last words, you made it perfect...<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-fire-faayar-faayaar-dedicated.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-62457264305178694812011-11-03T03:55:30.624-04:002011-11-03T03:55:30.624-04:00The rhythm when reading is great. :) Had fun readi...The rhythm when reading is great. :) Had fun reading it.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-12192939214955518402011-11-02T16:04:37.958-04:002011-11-02T16:04:37.958-04:00Oh how I love the "oh" sounds in this. D...Oh how I love the "oh" sounds in this. Dreamy and wonderful. Thank you for sharing with us.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-44356257249190950762011-11-02T15:01:20.265-04:002011-11-02T15:01:20.265-04:00Beautiful alliteration. Glad I know French..it wa...Beautiful alliteration. Glad I know French..it was lovely.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-83957201407631592812011-11-02T12:16:46.502-04:002011-11-02T12:16:46.502-04:00Wonderful flow here. The alliterative nature to t...Wonderful flow here. The alliterative nature to the sounds are done perfectly. Nice read, thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-43808177890099983962011-11-02T00:16:58.452-04:002011-11-02T00:16:58.452-04:00Don't be deterred if you don't get many co...Don't be deterred if you don't get many comments at first but I must tell you that your language sense is intoxicating-- Again, your associative leaps and nicely ambiguous "meaning" are wonderful. I wonder if you've investigated The Seneca Review, perhaps send a few poems in? I had a poem in that journal many moons ago and have thought about sending in some of my prose poems. Thanks for reading me today; I especially loved:<br /><br />The au courant says au revoir when, au début, it thought of you – now ordinary, then so strange. The open windows overlook an oleander’s opaque scent, the aubergines loll on the vine, a two-hand nocturne skips a beat. I posted an aubergine poem awhile back...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-69225193813090950022011-11-01T19:49:10.766-04:002011-11-01T19:49:10.766-04:00Great alliteration, and a lively flow.Great alliteration, and a lively flow.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74365519410373459132011-11-01T18:42:16.119-04:002011-11-01T18:42:16.119-04:00fascinating dance to your words...your flow of ima...fascinating dance to your words...your flow of imagery one to the next is vivid...the table shifting made me thing of an earth quake honestly...well played...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74950392517352582992011-11-01T16:18:47.634-04:002011-11-01T16:18:47.634-04:00Dover Beach is a classic :) The first three images...Dover Beach is a classic :) The first three images in this poem are simply delectable! Mesmerising writing!somewhereamelodyhttp://somewhereamelody.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com