tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post1928675040202741914..comments2024-03-28T15:15:05.993-04:00Comments on Exquisite Corpse: The FireRoy Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-84052055239606112912011-11-16T23:17:19.284-05:002011-11-16T23:17:19.284-05:00Its very interesting ... I enjoyed it a lot. thank...Its very interesting ... I enjoyed it a lot. thanks for sharing...<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-where-you-will-go.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-38917560298807031042011-11-16T22:55:19.562-05:002011-11-16T22:55:19.562-05:00You had at "The furious forest fire fought......You had at "The furious forest fire fought..." Love it! I love its rhythm...lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01923283133219937836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-44680719315265808672011-11-16T16:26:44.157-05:002011-11-16T16:26:44.157-05:00I admire your originality and your poetic vocabula...I admire your originality and your poetic vocabulary. Great imagination.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74647330510324065192011-11-16T00:40:24.735-05:002011-11-16T00:40:24.735-05:00This is totally amazing-- you take us into the eth...This is totally amazing-- you take us into the ether with your language-- which in my humble opinion, what poetry is meant to do: I love the music in these lines:<br /><br />The furious forest fire fought, those flaming fires almost won, the fair of heart fast flung the art the faded fortress walls were hung: a festive frieze, four fripperies, a limpid fawn in furbelows, a scorched and sunburnt fenwood girl, her fenwood arrows and her bow.<br /><br /><br />I will be dreaming in the key of F...if there is such a key. xxxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-83081874908768365782011-11-15T18:56:19.144-05:002011-11-15T18:56:19.144-05:00ok i felt like i was in V for Vendetta, only with ...ok i felt like i was in V for Vendetta, only with F for Freakin crazy alliteration...haha...makes it a fun dance through your words though...at least they were together eh?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-35238978577950967222011-11-15T17:20:07.121-05:002011-11-15T17:20:07.121-05:00Wow, what a tongue twister! You've got great p...Wow, what a tongue twister! You've got great poetic word and sound play in the mix of it all.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-86730588954744762682011-11-15T16:45:06.484-05:002011-11-15T16:45:06.484-05:00I'm never sure whether these little paragraphs...I'm never sure whether these little paragraphs are intended to have an external meaning as well as a scrimshaw form meaning. Again, alliteration is masterly here, and the picture of the fenwood wife stands out in cameo.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-23664762259129389352011-11-15T16:39:54.718-05:002011-11-15T16:39:54.718-05:00Posted to dVerse Poets Open Link Night: http://dve...Posted to dVerse Poets Open Link Night: http://dversepoets.com/2011/11/15/open-link-night-week-18/Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-34075803520615269782011-11-15T16:11:20.756-05:002011-11-15T16:11:20.756-05:00haha love the tongue twisty nature of your piece, ...haha love the tongue twisty nature of your piece, great job!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-47728601974020452902011-11-15T16:04:41.539-05:002011-11-15T16:04:41.539-05:00sighhhhh.... timeless. ♥
http://magicinthebackyar...sighhhhh.... timeless. ♥<br /><br />http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/11/14/the-widow/Kelwal76https://www.blogger.com/profile/16147000194703779929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-31122174947053950162011-05-06T14:55:25.009-04:002011-05-06T14:55:25.009-04:00You are bringing a very unique voice to our little...You are bringing a very unique voice to our little group.MJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03600447889649238174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-9716823949246617202011-05-06T10:57:15.785-04:002011-05-06T10:57:15.785-04:00You blow me away K - keep writing!You blow me away K - keep writing!Laurie Leclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04190403569858898495noreply@blogger.com