tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post3817426115778374933..comments2024-03-28T15:15:05.993-04:00Comments on Exquisite Corpse: The Ballad of Lonesome LakeRoy Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-40092451085578932232013-10-28T15:15:55.343-04:002013-10-28T15:15:55.343-04:00Eeps!How gory but devilishly wicked!Loved it:-)Eeps!How gory but devilishly wicked!Loved it:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-37987702543355296672013-10-28T13:20:34.084-04:002013-10-28T13:20:34.084-04:00Oh dear, a really gruesome tale..I may have to pas...Oh dear, a really gruesome tale..I may have to pass it on it's so good!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-14575248487040227752013-10-28T09:46:44.995-04:002013-10-28T09:46:44.995-04:00Ouch. Darkness reigns.Ouch. Darkness reigns.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-44531293152958004362013-10-27T18:24:15.863-04:002013-10-27T18:24:15.863-04:00Shades of "Rosemary's Baby!" An eeri...Shades of "Rosemary's Baby!" An eerie tale indeed!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-61264686731529553242013-10-27T15:19:41.983-04:002013-10-27T15:19:41.983-04:00Yikes! Good though. :-)Yikes! Good though. :-)Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-73478956766362885282013-10-27T14:29:07.396-04:002013-10-27T14:29:07.396-04:00Oh Kathy.. brilliant but dark.. just cause those r...Oh Kathy.. brilliant but dark.. just cause those red eyes.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-61103375525530293422013-10-27T13:39:41.124-04:002013-10-27T13:39:41.124-04:00really nice....did not remember this one...but the...really nice....did not remember this one...but the cadence of the lines is spot on...and still it sings....great story telling as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-38562187040073818812013-10-27T13:28:28.016-04:002013-10-27T13:28:28.016-04:00ugh... this made my breath stop... the details lik...ugh... this made my breath stop... the details like her tying her hair into a steady knot gave me additional shivers..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-70884580156235657892012-02-11T13:33:42.223-05:002012-02-11T13:33:42.223-05:00I find this very strong and sad, I feel for the mo...I find this very strong and sad, I feel for the mother, which makes this a successful poem I think.poetrydiaryhttp://www.poetry-diary.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-63393701533840237342012-02-08T23:36:06.155-05:002012-02-08T23:36:06.155-05:00Wow! I normally don't care for poetry that rhy...Wow! I normally don't care for poetry that rhymes but this is just a fantastic, dark story. I'm impressed.Zouxzouxhttp://zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-4765063047969418632012-02-02T13:53:35.091-05:002012-02-02T13:53:35.091-05:00This gives me shivers. Great rhythm, as stated ab...This gives me shivers. Great rhythm, as stated above, beautifully done. A 'Shutter Island' sort of lullaby.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-17424760271331299882012-02-02T04:53:43.562-05:002012-02-02T04:53:43.562-05:00So rhythmic and dark! I love it!
EveSo rhythmic and dark! I love it!<br /><br />EveEve Redwaterhttp://everedwater.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-6133776919884506842012-02-01T21:42:28.780-05:002012-02-01T21:42:28.780-05:00Yeesh. Schizophrenic lullabye. Quite the poetic ma...Yeesh. Schizophrenic lullabye. Quite the poetic mallet here...and some grisly black humor.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-32299859806096917272012-02-01T11:29:55.255-05:002012-02-01T11:29:55.255-05:00Wow! This is a real kick in the gut! The childli...Wow! This is a real kick in the gut! The childlike verse undercuts the narrative. Whew! I want my mommy now! Good job.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-75510718798500179832012-02-01T10:07:14.190-05:002012-02-01T10:07:14.190-05:00So poetic and rhythmic... and with a somber mood.....So poetic and rhythmic... and with a somber mood... fantastic, Kathy!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-61396486432818264362012-01-31T22:07:58.886-05:002012-01-31T22:07:58.886-05:00Nice, sounding like a lullaby and a devil in it. H...Nice, sounding like a lullaby and a devil in it. How else could it end? Very impressed in the raw verse!iggyn8ushttp://billclaybrook.typepad.com/blog/2012/01/calliope-zeus.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74344676280744031562012-01-31T19:02:04.469-05:002012-01-31T19:02:04.469-05:00Mercy. I'll find a different sitter. Yes, I...Mercy. I'll find a different sitter. Yes, I'm sure!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-34646956487839886522012-01-31T18:29:31.931-05:002012-01-31T18:29:31.931-05:00this just sings...yes it is dark but dang it sings...this just sings...yes it is dark but dang it sings...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-83707716855495763102012-01-31T16:57:02.621-05:002012-01-31T16:57:02.621-05:00Oh, this is great to read, and so dark and light. ...Oh, this is great to read, and so dark and light. Love the pattern, and "Baby's head is sticky like/Syrup on a cake." So fun.angeliquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10220424642455842665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-15692403147646198922012-01-31T16:55:55.046-05:002012-01-31T16:55:55.046-05:00As grisly as it is, it is a fun read!
@AudreyHowi...As grisly as it is, it is a fun read!<br /><br />@AudreyHowittAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-78010579314202144032012-01-31T16:44:03.681-05:002012-01-31T16:44:03.681-05:00I have to echo the Gashlycrumb Tinies comment.
Th...I have to echo the Gashlycrumb Tinies comment.<br /><br />This is just so good. So much fun to read.Sky Raft Wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09178209634278049386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74651033558635440242012-01-31T15:39:38.915-05:002012-01-31T15:39:38.915-05:00Posted to dVerse Poets at http://dversepoets.com/Posted to dVerse Poets at http://dversepoets.com/Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-82515149894333540262012-01-27T17:16:17.169-05:002012-01-27T17:16:17.169-05:00Holy! Gashlycrumb Tinies meet Ira Levin.Holy! Gashlycrumb Tinies meet Ira Levin.The Clever Puphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07198739825136188378noreply@blogger.com