tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post936011988844303737..comments2024-03-28T15:15:05.993-04:00Comments on Exquisite Corpse: Another MouseRoy Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-53306147317148204542014-02-24T07:33:42.810-05:002014-02-24T07:33:42.810-05:00Am glad he was saved this time at least and maybe ...Am glad he was saved this time at least and maybe he has learnt his lesson and will find his way back home someday?Wonderfully written:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-32199692077972643462014-02-23T23:56:01.466-05:002014-02-23T23:56:01.466-05:00smiles... it would've saved me a bit of troubl...smiles... it would've saved me a bit of trouble in my youth if i had listened to what my mom has said more..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-74523140583670061692014-02-23T21:44:55.238-05:002014-02-23T21:44:55.238-05:00A new one for me ~ Very nice perspective from the...A new one for me ~ Very nice perspective from the mouse ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-36525246313797399322014-02-23T16:31:34.759-05:002014-02-23T16:31:34.759-05:00third time is a charm...third time is a charm...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-80791777071801103952014-02-23T16:28:37.654-05:002014-02-23T16:28:37.654-05:00Ha,, great post.. and I had not read it before... ...Ha,, great post.. and I had not read it before... thank you for sharing.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-18142976948178001632014-02-23T16:17:54.852-05:002014-02-23T16:17:54.852-05:00Posted again to dVerse Poets Pub—Let's be fabu...Posted again to dVerse Poets Pub—<a href="http://dversepoets.com/2014/02/22/lets-be-fabulists-today/" rel="nofollow">Let's be fabulists today</a>.Roy Schulzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-41437981807113335622013-10-21T07:27:53.129-04:002013-10-21T07:27:53.129-04:00Aww poor ickle mouse, I love the moral in this tal...Aww poor ickle mouse, I love the moral in this tale, beatifully crafted.yikicihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02053193063885023803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-76320072692988565412013-10-20T23:39:45.421-04:002013-10-20T23:39:45.421-04:00Fun story with a moral. Kids love the personificat...Fun story with a moral. Kids love the personification of animals, I suspect.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-75806726698526173032013-10-20T21:01:27.901-04:002013-10-20T21:01:27.901-04:00yet another blast from the past....
i def like mic...yet another blast from the past....<br />i def like mice stories...<br /><br />and thanks for the intel the other day tooBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-58671316299192822632012-04-15T23:26:07.520-04:002012-04-15T23:26:07.520-04:00ha nice...i like that you take the character of a ...ha nice...i like that you take the character of a mouse to bring across your morale...nice job..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-71778007890934257782012-04-15T21:48:22.496-04:002012-04-15T21:48:22.496-04:00smiles...fun little tale...and perhaps this time h...smiles...fun little tale...and perhaps this time he will remember what his mother told him...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-70179304920298099082012-04-15T21:24:27.835-04:002012-04-15T21:24:27.835-04:00Posted to DVerse Poets Pub—Subways.Posted to DVerse Poets Pub—<a href="http://dversepoets.com/2012/04/14/poetics-subway/" rel="nofollow">Subways</a>.Roy Schulzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-70624526103711434372012-01-10T11:15:50.894-05:002012-01-10T11:15:50.894-05:00love this, thanks for linking.
:)love this, thanks for linking.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-4333460804682302852012-01-10T07:07:36.090-05:002012-01-10T07:07:36.090-05:00Good story! Nicely written!
http://charleslmashbur...Good story! Nicely written!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/billy-bully-bull/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/billy-bully-bull/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-84927160413427279972012-01-09T21:46:21.692-05:002012-01-09T21:46:21.692-05:00Published to Gooseberry Garden—Children's Stor...Published to Gooseberry Garden—<a href="http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2012/01/poetry-picnic-week-21-childrens-stories.html" rel="nofollow">Children's Stories and Rhymes</a>.Roy Schulzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-89220854996971147812011-12-31T19:48:32.287-05:002011-12-31T19:48:32.287-05:00what a cute story and a great way to explain the r...what a cute story and a great way to explain the random running back and forth of a mouse at the subway.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-19221965879023241322011-12-31T19:42:08.617-05:002011-12-31T19:42:08.617-05:00Cute poem/story! I hope you write children's v...Cute poem/story! I hope you write children's verse; I think you'd be very good at it.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-35222932114807476662011-12-31T13:07:03.455-05:002011-12-31T13:07:03.455-05:00what an adventure for the mouse,
great imagery,
H...what an adventure for the mouse,<br /><br />great imagery,<br />Happy New Year.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-56057322958027603192011-12-30T14:56:45.138-05:002011-12-30T14:56:45.138-05:00I was there. It was like a movie. How wonderfully ...I was there. It was like a movie. How wonderfully you animated and personified the little mouse. The rhyme gave it flair and personality but didn't make it feel arch or strained. What a nice present, so well written!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-40348570149143714362011-10-13T13:17:49.670-04:002011-10-13T13:17:49.670-04:00Aw, lovely! I like this tale of the mouse.Aw, lovely! I like this tale of the mouse.Liz Hindshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04646532093872561703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-20105910004852127152011-10-12T14:31:08.566-04:002011-10-12T14:31:08.566-04:00A Memorable Mousey M.A Memorable Mousey M.Scriptor Senexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17795521284516432520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-29214842190884690482011-10-12T12:43:52.766-04:002011-10-12T12:43:52.766-04:00Awwww... we live and we learn eh! Very nice poetry...Awwww... we live and we learn eh! Very nice poetry. Thanks for visiting me too. :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-57105776554726861772011-10-12T08:52:32.209-04:002011-10-12T08:52:32.209-04:00You're lucky it was only a mouse you saw onthe...You're lucky it was only a mouse you saw onthe subway tracks... where I live they're more like RUS's (from Golman's The Princess Bride -rodents of unusual size)!!!Merylhttp://departingthetext.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-9393302427583428182011-10-12T00:09:20.520-04:002011-10-12T00:09:20.520-04:00A hard life and all in the day of a mouse!! You ha...A hard life and all in the day of a mouse!! You have an excellent poem here well written!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-73719276408343527982011-10-11T23:54:17.228-04:002011-10-11T23:54:17.228-04:00Fortunate Foto and cute verse!Fortunate Foto and cute verse!Granny Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.com