tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post6694739700609826202..comments2024-03-28T15:15:05.993-04:00Comments on Exquisite Corpse: Jump Rope Rhymes for a New MilleniumRoy Schulzehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-8397169567532421022013-10-18T14:03:56.973-04:002013-10-18T14:03:56.973-04:00oh this was great. what glorious muffins --- and t...oh this was great. what glorious muffins --- and the sadness of a mother gone, packaged into nursery rhymes...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-80136911287550154632013-10-18T12:37:58.594-04:002013-10-18T12:37:58.594-04:00Turn a nursery rhyme - patty caked and marked - ac...Turn a nursery rhyme - patty caked and marked - actually they began dark. There is a strong streak of satire hidden in nearly everyone, but like the Beats you brought it modern - to abandonment, drugs, loneliness, and abuse. Superb work. Very very effective.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-65366743541548518132013-10-18T11:09:04.654-04:002013-10-18T11:09:04.654-04:00haha..i wonder what she baked into those muffins y...haha..i wonder what she baked into those muffins you know...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-29644011833079813432013-10-18T08:43:58.159-04:002013-10-18T08:43:58.159-04:00Here again and still clever writes!
Anna :o]Here again and still clever writes!<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-22819763995133301432013-10-17T21:45:32.973-04:002013-10-17T21:45:32.973-04:00Whew, these really pack a strong punch.Whew, these really pack a strong punch.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-43813586101261324662013-10-17T21:42:18.641-04:002013-10-17T21:42:18.641-04:00Packs a wallop with the child like sing song style...Packs a wallop with the child like sing song style...that dark underbelly. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-32063667157989077892013-10-17T19:43:16.184-04:002013-10-17T19:43:16.184-04:00ha i remember these....a sad bit of reality in the...ha i remember these....a sad bit of reality in the soup of our lives, surely....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-37776625208587343392013-02-23T04:14:38.354-05:002013-02-23T04:14:38.354-05:00Dark tales for dark times - and I can just imagine...Dark tales for dark times - and I can just imagine the joy on innocent faces as they skip rope to these rhymes :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-49024955214438753652013-02-22T21:03:50.298-05:002013-02-22T21:03:50.298-05:00I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry but these are ...I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry but these are great. The contemporary subject matter gives a good dose of salt to what can be an overly sweet genre in clumsy hands. Wonderful!Zouxzouxhttp://zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-13060462820752484242013-02-22T05:56:37.545-05:002013-02-22T05:56:37.545-05:00Fairy tales with a bite indeed.
Cleverly composed...Fairy tales with a bite indeed.<br /><br />Cleverly composed.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-76718158938464734632013-02-22T00:11:41.616-05:002013-02-22T00:11:41.616-05:00these have the spark and dark of a grimms fairy ta...these have the spark and dark of a grimms fairy tale =)lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-52910225610548218382013-02-21T23:55:41.486-05:002013-02-21T23:55:41.486-05:00Wow--you have a joyful, playful rhythm delivering ...Wow--you have a joyful, playful rhythm delivering a slap in the face. Brilliant.Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-78611690612122555402013-02-21T22:55:01.164-05:002013-02-21T22:55:01.164-05:00that second one is like a twisted nursery rhyme......that second one is like a twisted nursery rhyme...kinda haunting you know...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-72076660759678778882013-02-21T22:47:06.456-05:002013-02-21T22:47:06.456-05:00I like how you combined the pic with the poem as w...I like how you combined the pic with the poem as well..fairy tale like but with bite ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-39679682049865843502012-02-15T01:18:00.680-05:002012-02-15T01:18:00.680-05:00I like the link to the picture - you've caught...I like the link to the picture - you've caught a particular spirit very well.poetrydiaryhttp://www.poetry-diary.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-43566408937562113022012-02-14T22:51:16.313-05:002012-02-14T22:51:16.313-05:00Such fun playful rhyme, truly divine and not a cri...Such fun playful rhyme, truly divine and not a crime. Even if the subject is rather dreary a bit, nicely done!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-938352628676570162012-02-14T20:56:38.561-05:002012-02-14T20:56:38.561-05:00You make it look so simple and playful yet the wor...You make it look so simple and playful yet the words sting and make this really sad...good use of the rhyme too ~<br /><br />Happy Hearts Day ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-17433963931964865142012-02-14T19:43:29.871-05:002012-02-14T19:43:29.871-05:00Both signify the harshness of today. I don't k...Both signify the harshness of today. I don't know what I'd do if I heard one of my kids saying the second one. <br /><br />Happy Valentine's Day!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-48879676440170608112012-02-14T17:16:29.850-05:002012-02-14T17:16:29.850-05:00wow...both of these are playful but there is a sad...wow...both of these are playful but there is a sadness in them as well...hard life in both....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-58538446126138001492012-02-14T17:09:04.592-05:002012-02-14T17:09:04.592-05:00A turn of the tale. I raised a boy without a mothe...A turn of the tale. I raised a boy without a mother and he is my Valentine heart...Mark Butkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028422696260495656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930079652968973427.post-401603426854796622012-02-14T16:44:05.194-05:002012-02-14T16:44:05.194-05:00Posted to the magnificent dVerse Poets Pub at:
ht...Posted to the magnificent dVerse Poets Pub at:<br /><br />http://dversepoets.com/2012/02/14/openlinknight-week-31/Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.com