There were far more snakes than even the season before, rising from the grass to the sound of her song, hanging from trees in the sun like so much forbidden fruit. Why make so many, she wondered, when all they really needed was one perfect pair?
Still, she was lonely and envied them their companionship and the close excitement of the den. There she got to talking with the most subtil of the beasts, and wondered aloud how they might make more people.
“Come close,” he said rising to his full height. “Come close, and I will show you how.”
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Sounds like she's in for a bad time!
ReplyDeleteNo happy end in store for her ....
ReplyDeleteLove the open end...
ReplyDeletewhile the instrument plays
The poison of free will hinted, come close and I shall tell you, like whispers of time. Powerful write.
ReplyDeletethose snakes - nothing changes
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your response.
Oh dear! Hope she'll be okay!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
oh you naughty
ReplyDeleteI loved it!
amazing tale.
ReplyDeletewow.
Delicious last line...yum...
ReplyDeletemildly EROTIC
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
Added to ABC Wednesday.
ReplyDeleteOooo, that kind of gave me the creeps but beautiful writing all the same.
ReplyDeleteWonderful and different post for E.
Interesting take on the Genesis story:)
ReplyDeleteEve just wanders too much. Look at us now :)
ReplyDeleteNaughtiness!
ReplyDeleteEncouragement
Rose, ABC Wednesday Team
Twisty, for sure♫
ReplyDeleteAdded to dVerse Poets Pub—It’s Tempting.
ReplyDeleteooo come close and i will show you....rather scary edge to that temptation for sure...
ReplyDeleteAdded to Sunday Scribblings—Myth."
ReplyDeletenice...or rather, nicesssssss
ReplyDeleteThe most subtle beast indeed..she will be fine..
ReplyDeleteThis is of course where women have learned they tricky ways, no wonder men are so vulnerable.
ReplyDeleteWildly imaginative; well done.
ReplyDeleteLove you take on this myth. Well done!
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