They say there’s forty words for snow.
None, though
for thirty-seven point nine degrees
of Celsius.
The flip-flop of doubt as sandals melt,
not into tar, as they are wont,
but onto concrete sidewalks, floating
sideways into slow repose as strangers
chatter into iced cafés, pile up
in tales of wilt and pushing fluids
(Getting old is hell, says Alan,
shouldering his laptop,
don’t get old.)
Time closes.
Sprinklers at 346 go on
and here at thirty-seven odd degrees,
headlights shine through the mists in flowing
goldfish tails that once, impossibly,
were arctic snow.
Oh, no,
this won’t get old.
Image: K. Bischoping.
None, though
for thirty-seven point nine degrees
of Celsius.
The flip-flop of doubt as sandals melt,
not into tar, as they are wont,
but onto concrete sidewalks, floating
sideways into slow repose as strangers
chatter into iced cafés, pile up
in tales of wilt and pushing fluids
(Getting old is hell, says Alan,
shouldering his laptop,
don’t get old.)
Time closes.
Sprinklers at 346 go on
and here at thirty-seven odd degrees,
headlights shine through the mists in flowing
goldfish tails that once, impossibly,
were arctic snow.
Oh, no,
this won’t get old.
Image: K. Bischoping.
perfect flow in this write, "sidewalks, floating, and mists in flowing", two great lines in this. Must say it's not 37degrees here but -1 in January in the middle of Canada might as well be 37. Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteIt was for Toronto's hottest day of 2011 -- 37.9 Celsius = 100.2 Fahrenheit.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of numbers throughout this. Keeps bringing my attention back to detail, "What does that mean?" It was an interesting read with unconvential images.
ReplyDeleteToday the temp was at least 35C, here in my Southern hemisphere world... I felt this piece in every hot degree.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your insightful comments on my poem.
Posted to the dVerse Poets pub! A new and happy year to all! http://dversepoets.com/2012/01/03/openlinknight-week-25/
ReplyDeletenice....it is rather cold here today and if the sprinklers cam on we might actually get some snow...my body may get old but i wont...smiles
ReplyDeleteWe had a burning summer here--hottest on record, and also the coldest winter temp ever recorded last year--I don't know why I feel that's pertinent, but it has something to do with how your poem nails where/how we coincide with our planet in that plane, and how it is always in some way surprising us, owning us. The language here is a thing of beauty, as always.
ReplyDeleteI love the segue from snow into heat and back into snow at the end. Wonderful piece.
ReplyDeletethe fluidity in this, as Semaphore brings up, is spot on. the images, the temperatures: it all just works beautifully.
ReplyDeleteLovely, complex keep your attention poem.
ReplyDeleteKathy....you get better and better.
Lady Nyo
Very nicely done, I like the flow here and the detail to numerical identification. Very nice touch with the use of Celsius as well, as those unaware of the difference to F will have a totally different interpretation. I love when little things like that can be used artistically. Wonderful write. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI feel the chill of winter brrr...very good use of weather and seasonal change ~
ReplyDeleteI like the snowy bookends , the sense of change, the image of the "flowing goldfish tails" much to enjoy here
ReplyDeletewarm winter here as well, not sure if it could get old either. I do like these mild temps.
ReplyDeletei like the flow of the lines here, kind of like flowing water, like a slow wind
ReplyDeletebumble bee
Wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off!
Weather is a contemplative tie and notches the days of life, the feeling of aging, the wanting not to get old--remembering the joy of summer heat that was never too hot to play, remembering the thrill of snow that lured us into a frozen wonderland. Don't age...no, no no no...don't age.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
There are some wonderful images here: "floating
ReplyDeletesideways into slow repose as strangers
chatter into iced cafés, pile up
in tales of wilt and pushing fluids"
- absolutely superb.
Lovely piece... I especially like the second stanza.
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Great images and some fine writing. An absorbing read.
ReplyDeleteugh...this was fascinating though, reading about the heat wave in the icy winter cold...would've use for some degrees more..
ReplyDeletewell, living here colorado, this poem make perfect sense to me. the seasons change every 5 minutes, yesterday i was scraping my windshield in 8 degree weather, today i'm running around in a tee shirt. it doesnt really get old, just intersting. very well written, enjoyed this very much
ReplyDeleteNice job. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite section:
"but onto concrete sidewalks, floating
sideways into slow repose as strangers
chatter into iced cafés, pile up
in tales of wilt and pushing fluids"
I agree with many above, Kathy, that the internal feel of "floating... slow repose..." has a lovely flavor. No matter what the thermometer says, or if it's speaking Celsius or Fahrenheit, this is a poem for all seasons. Nicely done! Amy
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Heat...I've had enough too. Though I've grown up with it, I'm certainly not used to it anymore. Turns me into a full-fledged whiner. ;) Enjoyed the poem very much. Appreciate your visit too.
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