Another nickel, another crazed midnight with Cleotis Hammersley. She insisted, the way only the lace-gloved, silk-trained rich can insist, that she was being spied on; she wanted, the way heroines always want, to leave the mansion and draw the watchers out; and it was raining, a way it never rains in southern California. I needed a drink, I needed a lot of life insurance . . . I needed a night alone reading Raymond Chandler. What I had was a coat of feathers, a black feather hat, a headache like a gun. I put them on and escorted Miss Hammersley to the granite shores.
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Kathy,
ReplyDeleteGive her company. Give her strength. She needs it! Great verse!
Hank
I must agree with Pare Hank, she needs someone with her...
ReplyDeletenice take!
JJRod'z
Maybe she needs someone without a drinking problem...
ReplyDeletesuch passion and hunger, powerfully delivered emotions.
ReplyDeletehope she gets what she needs to survive.
Chandler would be proud. Terrific write. : )
ReplyDeleteYow! Love this one, big grin!!
ReplyDeleteI love love love "headache like a gun"...
ReplyDeletedivine lines.
ReplyDeleteimpressive magpie.
veri imaginative piece
ReplyDeleteThis is great. I love it. "A coat of feathers, a black feather hat, a headache like a gun."
ReplyDeleteFabulous homage to Chandler, another hard-boiled bird.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Perfect timing, Kathy. I just finished reading The Long Goodbye for the nth time. "The first kiss is magic, the second is intimate, the third is routine. After that you take the girl's clothes off."
ReplyDeleteLove how this one reads out to me. Words that sang. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteTight piece. Love how it spills from the depths of intrigue.
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative, impressive read.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I think it's time your feathered friend found a new companion. Great response to the picture.
ReplyDeletedang...like this one all the more...your descriptions are top notch and then the melancholy "i put them on", perfect...
ReplyDeleteI can hear a deep male voice ... a voice-over in a play, film or television production. Beautifully composed!!!!
ReplyDeleteStunning title, followed by a stellar piece - a perfect Chandlerlike.
ReplyDeleteNice writing! I enjoyed "She insisted, the way only the lace-gloved, silk-trained rich can insist," We get her number immediately!
ReplyDeleteExcellent
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing
martine
Although I haven't explored many noir style books or films, this one had a touch of that. Good read :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
Excellent - great atmosphere.
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