US (online) launch of 52 Weeks to a Sweeter Life
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Join us to celebrate the launch of 52 Weeks in the US! Wednesday October
16, 7:30pm EDT In conversation with Dr. B. Nilaja Green and organized
by Charis ...
4 weeks ago
For the month of July, the members of Exquisite Corpse are writing 100 words a day on each letter of the alphabet in turn.
ReplyDeleteThat was a cute mouse/mice poem. I hope they all found safe places to live. ; )
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit to my ABC Wednesday post today.
I think it may be safer if all mice moved to the country!
ReplyDeleteWhew, I guess he made it to outsmart the train for another day.
ReplyDeletePoor little mouse!
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
Your mouse post is much better!
ReplyDeleteFortunate Foto and cute verse!
ReplyDeleteA hard life and all in the day of a mouse!! You have an excellent poem here well written!!
ReplyDeleteYou're lucky it was only a mouse you saw onthe subway tracks... where I live they're more like RUS's (from Golman's The Princess Bride -rodents of unusual size)!!!
ReplyDeleteAwwww... we live and we learn eh! Very nice poetry. Thanks for visiting me too. :)
ReplyDeleteA Memorable Mousey M.
ReplyDeleteAw, lovely! I like this tale of the mouse.
ReplyDeleteI was there. It was like a movie. How wonderfully you animated and personified the little mouse. The rhyme gave it flair and personality but didn't make it feel arch or strained. What a nice present, so well written!
ReplyDeletewhat an adventure for the mouse,
ReplyDeletegreat imagery,
Happy New Year.
Cute poem/story! I hope you write children's verse; I think you'd be very good at it.
ReplyDeletewhat a cute story and a great way to explain the random running back and forth of a mouse at the subway.
ReplyDeletePublished to Gooseberry Garden—Children's Stories and Rhymes.
ReplyDeleteGood story! Nicely written!
ReplyDeletehttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/billy-bully-bull/
love this, thanks for linking.
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Posted to DVerse Poets Pub—Subways.
ReplyDeletesmiles...fun little tale...and perhaps this time he will remember what his mother told him...smiles.
ReplyDeleteha nice...i like that you take the character of a mouse to bring across your morale...nice job..
ReplyDeleteyet another blast from the past....
ReplyDeletei def like mice stories...
and thanks for the intel the other day too
Fun story with a moral. Kids love the personification of animals, I suspect.
ReplyDeleteAww poor ickle mouse, I love the moral in this tale, beatifully crafted.
ReplyDeletePosted again to dVerse Poets Pub—Let's be fabulists today.
ReplyDeleteHa,, great post.. and I had not read it before... thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletethird time is a charm...
ReplyDeleteA new one for me ~ Very nice perspective from the mouse ~
ReplyDeletesmiles... it would've saved me a bit of trouble in my youth if i had listened to what my mom has said more..
ReplyDeleteAm glad he was saved this time at least and maybe he has learnt his lesson and will find his way back home someday?Wonderfully written:-)
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